Azila

Stockmar>>Sure we can be bestest friends... but wanna do the activity? XD Penguin>>You are fabulous! That's exactly what I was looking for. Hopefully this will catch on... ~Azila~

Nobody wants to try this? :( Just shows how terribly unpopular I am around here... ~Azila~

Thanks to you both! [Seems like a waste of good coffee. :p] Lol! This is modeled after myself, actually. I hate the taste but love the smell. :D Oh, and ...

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Though there are a lot of little things that could be addressed via nitpicks, I understand that that's not what you're looking for--so I won't give it to you. Overall ...

This is for Caligula's Stolen Dialogue Contest . NOTE: I haven't written in past for a while, and though I combed very carefully, I'm afraid there might be a few ...

Amen! Good tips. I have to agree, I skimmed a bit--but when I'm in need I will come back here. Thank you! ~Azila~

... you might want t proofread it, though, because I saw a couple sentences where you didn't capitalize the first letter. *gaspness* :oops: I was rushing to finish it because ...

These are some basic issues that I find myself always talking about in my critiques. Sensual Description I know I do this, or used to. I got some critiques about ...

So the deal is, I'll post a picture that I find off the web, and you guys have to make up poetic metaphors/similes to describe the scene in the picture ...

Vivi, dear, try not to defend yourself from reviewers. If you don't want harsh reviews, you shouldn't post unfinished, unpolished works. Some people like saying only the negatives, it's a ...

You're amazing! I will have to go check out the Story Theme Generator... :D ~A~

I really liked this! I want to read more. The thing that I think will be tough for you about using the journal format is: no matter how good a ...

Firstly, I agree with everyone else who has reviewed. I might restate things, but I'm just telling you my opinion. Overall, I think I like it. It's a little random ...

That's pretty good. I think you could work more on shading and making him look 3D, because right now he's a little flat lol. Maybe try working with the feathers ...