Azila

Hi there BBB! Nitpicks first... Have you ever listened to your heart thump against your chest at night, when no one is around to hear it? The pulse is outstandingly ...

This is very nice! I like (as Via said) that it isn't just another "flower picture" of pretty, colorful flowers covered in dew. (not that those can't be beautiful; they're ...

Hi there, Muffin! Nitpicks first. It had been a very long day, and Marie was having difficulty thinking of anything other than her bathtub, and settling down with her favorite ...

I've come to review, like I promised I would! Nitpicks first.. Back in the days when ideas of ‘peace and love’ defied the social norm and challenged the conventional ways ...

I'm back, as per request! *bows* I'm delighted to say that this piece makes a lot more sense now that you've edited it. It shouldn't be in Non-Fiction, (I recommend ...

And in Canada, pyjamas is spelled with the Y. :oops: Sorry, I hadn't realized. ~Azila~

Firstly, I want to welcome you to the YWS! Secondly, I have never read Twilight, so I can't accuse you of plagiarism like the other two reviewers have. Thirdly, please ...

I think I liked this. XD The first go 'round, I had not clue what I was reading, but the second time it made more sense. I like how it ...

Thank you sosososo much. Sorry, I tend to abuse commas a lot, they're always there when they're not needed and then they disappear from where they should be... Also sorry ...

One of the security guards said that last year people went to class in their pyjamas. "pyjamas" should be "pajamas" :D Well, Aedomir pointed out all the other things I ...

Hi there Stella! I really enjoyed reading this, but more details later--I'll start with the nitpicks... Saying goodbye to Tom was the hardest thing I ever had to do. I ...

Hi there and welcome to the YWS! Nitpicks first. She had looked after him since he had been a wee lad, mothering him and patching him up when he scraped ...

Hi there, and welcome to the YWS! I can be as mean as I want? Oh goody. :D Nitpicks first... There are three things that should be known about me: ...

Gahks>> Very true, very true. Just to let everyone know: I posted an article about repetition (based on this one) in the Knowledge Base. ~Azila~

Repetition is one of my biggest pet peeves. It (in my opinion) is what determines a great flow from a good flow--and thus a great writer from a good writer. ...