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Azila

  • Art & Photography Re: some more awesomeness from yours truly ^.~

    These are cool. I like the relaxed, simple style and for the most part the proportions seem to be pretty on. Elizabeth's face is a little strange-looking. I think her ...

    Mar 3, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: American Cowboy Bush

    Hehe, I love it. Makes a good avvy, too! ^_^ Cheers! ~Azila~

    Mar 2, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Firestarter (President of British Operations) Moves On

    I don't know you very well, in fact I think the only times I've contacted you were once before I joined and once recently about becoming an Instructor (thank you ...

    Mar 2, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Elephants never forget

    WHat I think it needed was something more to clarify that this elephant was a toy. Oh, no! *politely disagrees* Part of what I love so much about this piece ...

    Mar 2, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: My photos--part 1

    Hello! 1. Cool expression! That's a pretty cat. But the picture its self is a little blurry and out of focus... I'm also bothered by the fact that the ears ...

    Mar 2, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Elephants never forget

    Hi Stars! I count sheep. All day, all night. I count them because I can't sleep. The rhyme here kind of bothered me. :? Also, where do the sheep come ...

    Mar 1, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Lost and Discovered: Prologue part 1

    Hi there, Shadow Thief! Thundered the raving mad Zeus, standing tall in his white toga. I might be wrong, but I think "raving mad" should be hyphenated, thus: "raving-mad." “I’ll ...

    Mar 1, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Something I made for my mum for mother's day

    That's so sweet! I love the purple hair, and the wings are very pretty. The eyes are a bit wonky, but they make the face look cute--if a bit lopsided. ...

    Mar 1, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: NN -- Prologue

    I've come to review, as requested. Sorry it took a little while, I've been pretty busy in my non-YWS life not to mention with my contest and all. ANYWAY... Dusky ...

    Feb 29, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Alphess: part one [revised as of 2008/03/11]

    Hello, Camille! My pelt begins to prickle, but I do not move. My limbs are heavy with warmth, and I want to enjoy the sunset for a while longer. A ...

    Feb 29, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Emma

    Hi, alleycat! Nitpicks first... Maybe this will be the time; maybe she’ll play with me this time, I think. I agree with Gyrfalcon: you don't need the "I think." In ...

    Feb 29, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Blue Manhattan

    Hi there, Gadi! I really liked this! (thus giving it 1st) 2. Men come and leave their loves by my gates; slowly, my sidewalks seem to pour open. I agree ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Beer Stains

    Hi there, Marionette! I don't know if you've read my post yet, but you won 3rd place. Congratulations! Nitpicks first: Couldn’t he just put his feet up on the couch ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Fiery Rain

    Hi there Cat! I don't know if you've read my post yet, but you won 2nd place! Congratulations! Climb. Small tree. Smells like squirrels. Dry. Not warm but still dry. ...

    Feb 28, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Supermarket story - INTRODUCTION - parts yet to be added

    There isn't anything blatantly wrong with this piece, but there isn't anything outstandingly phenomenal either. In fact there isn't much of ANYTHING! ^_~ Dear Saint is right--there isn't enough of ...

    Feb 27, 2008


Perhaps when we find ourselves wanting everything, it is because we are dangerously close to wanting nothing.
— Sylvia Plath