Azila

PS. Azila mentioned that Blizzard seems moody -- she is. I was hoping that someone would notice that. =) Good! Elaborate! Make it even MORE so, so that everyone reading ...

I see. You will win! ~Azila~ P.S. How much are the prizes?

Hello! Nitpicks first... She would read Matty bedtime stories before he went to fell asleep, and would place a blanket over me when I fell asleep studying late at night. ...

:oops:I thought I already reviewed this! Ah well, I read it, then had to leave the house, I think. I will definitely review it when you post it again! Sorry. ...

Hi there, Wolf! Sorry I didn't get this to you sooner, I saved it as a draft then my computer wouldn't let me on... Anyway: You haven't edited TOO too ...

Hi there, Cat!

Sophie (or Sophia), Lynne, Melonie, Emma, Angelina (or Angela), Kit (or Kitty), Dianna, Lauren, Lydia, Ellen, Shayla, Julia... If you want unusual names, I suggest you look at Native American ...

This one took me a lot longer than it should have because I'm a lazy sod. I bought the supplies back in December and just finished it a little while ...

Hi there, Lupe! Nitpicks first... From my perch on the dock, my eyes explore the dark emerald green water. I think "emerald green" should be hyphenated. My gaze travels down ...

1. Like Nate said, just because the view count is seven it doesn't mean seven people have actually read it. Also, sometimes I'll start reading it, but if it doesn't ...

Good job, Gadi!

Thanks, Lupis and Camille! I will definitely take your advise into account as I edit. Just a note for future reviewers: I wrote this a looooong time ago and my ...

OOPS! I thought I already critiqued this! I guess I forgot... Okay, because there aren't many grammatical issues (and the few ones that there are have already been pointed out), ...

I've come to deliver a review, as per request! *bows* Just keep in mind that I don't know all that much about poetry. :roll: Firstly, is the first line ("True ...

Hi Cat! I'm sooooooo sorry I couldn't do this as soon as I promised--my rabbit just had surgery, and we've been force-feeding her all day. :( Anyway... Insistent wind snaked ...