Azila

That would be a really good advertisement. You should send it to them. :D It looks so professional! Lol. ~Azila~

Hi, there! I just reviewed your "chapter one" and I didn't even realize that there was a prologue! :oops: So here I am to review your prologue. :D Few humans ...

Alright, I'm back--as promised. :P Nitpicks first: It was evening on the day of the summer solstice when the gale hit the craggy beach with the force of one hundred ...

I just (at about 9:10 pm, EST) tried to save a post as a draft and got this message: Oops, that page doesn't exist Return To Home "return to home" ...

Alright, I'm back--as promised. :P Nitpicks first: It was evening on the day of the summer solstice when the gale hit the craggy beach with the force of one hundred ...

Alright, I'm back--as promised. :P Nitpicks first: It was evening on the day of the summer solstice when the gale hit the craggy beach with the force of one hundred ...

If you don’t think its going to be fun, most likely that you’ll choose not to go, and if you still decide to go, then you shouldn’t have. This should ...

Hi, Stella! Nitpicks first... We sat with our rifles over our shoulders against the wall, Da and I. The sun was rising. Da pulled his cap off and stared up ...

I have to admit -- I only skimmed this. You want to know why? It's because you used that "pre" feature. I find it really hard to read, because it ...

This is a really cool idea. *gives you a star* It looks so mysterious and magical. The one suggestion I have (if you try this again) is that you make ...

Hullo, all! At popular Skins's demand, I'm re-vamping this thread. You probably know the drill: if you want a critique, tell me so here -- just make sure to post ...

You're so organized, Cal! It's amazing that you can keep track of it all to well. :D *blows a kiss* ~Azila~

Hi, Prok! Here's my review, I hope it lives up to what you wanted! If Timothy Weaver ever told the truth, it was a half-truth, and Tim Weaver didn't tell ...

Good idea! Erm... at least I think so. I don't think I've ever even been over there. >> ~Azila~

Hi there, Lupis! *gasp* You changed her name! :shock: What was wrong with 'Deuce'? Anyway, onto the nitpicks: Not bothering to brush [s]through[/s] her hair, she wandered downstairs, finding Chessieâ€