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Re: YWS Desktop
I like the dandelion. It symbolizes life, the new generation, wishes, etc. It's perfect! Have you PMed Nate about putting it in the Downloads section? You should. ^_~ ~Azila~
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Re: Guilty Pleasures.
Hello there! Are you new to the YWS? I don't think I've seen you before. My name is Azila--nice to meet you. :D Valid sources say it used to be ...
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Re: Treacherous Waters
Hiya! I have to admit, I didn't actually read this, :oops: The reason it that you put it in the "pre" setting, which I find tiresome and hard on the ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
A little green lizard. I don't know why, but that's what it makes me think of. ^_^ Azila (pronounced "aa-ZEE-la)
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: I Just Finished My First Rough Draft EVER!
Does the hate of Eragon have to come up in EVERY topic around here? Anyway, congrats Harmony. I salute you--I can never keep interested in one story for a long ...
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Re: Description!
Here's a new one in honor of the Instructor competition. You can use this or the old one, whichever you find more inspiring. :D ~Azila~
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Your favourite tense?
I like present for short things and past for long things. Present can get really tedious for both the reader and the writer because it's difficult not to go into ...
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Re: Dragon Bait 5
I've been mulling over your plot for the last few days and thought of some flaws that I though I'd point out: 1. Language. If Derik's getting one woman from ...
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Re: The Final Performance of the Night
Hello! The brilliant orchestra compose a sorrow tune, heard from six feet below the onlookers feet. I think this should be something like "The brilliant orchestra composes a sorrowful tune, ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: New Photos by May
Hiya, Mays! 1. Interesting idea, but very amaturely done. 2. Melikey! Although I think it would have been better if you'd made the background blacker--in contrast to the flower. 3. ...
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Re: The Leader of the Band
Hello, Fuz! Nitpicks first, overall opinions after... My stomach turns upside-down, I get a horrific headache that leaves me writhing in pain on the inside, and I don’t want to ...
Apr 3, 2008 -
Re: Through the Poppies
Hello, there! I realize this is an old topic, but since everyone seems to be reviewing it. I thought I'd try as well. :D A small girl in a summer ...
Apr 3, 2008 -
Re: Front Page Not Working? Don't Worry, Be Happy
Oops. I was just about to "complain" about it. :oops: Thanks for all you do, Nate! *bows down on knees* ~Azila~
Apr 3, 2008 -
Re: Dragon Bait 5
Hiya! The crying smilies worked--as always. :D Abruptly the suited back stopped moving, and Penelope helplessly felt her legs keep walking. Comma after "abruptly." ...this is it, I'm going to ...
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Re: computer drawing
You can try attaching it in the "attach file" place, down at the bottom of the posting/editing page... (i.e. where you are when you're posting/editing a post) There is another ...
Apr 3, 2008
