Azila

Thin, darkish hair... big eyes, skinny and short.

Hello! I have returned. :twisted: -Nitpicks- Jo had been doing a lot of thinking about David lately… You can just say "she" rather than "Jo" here--I think it would be ...

Hello! I have returned. :twisted: -Nitpicks- Jo had been doing a lot of thinking about David lately… You can just say "she" rather than "Jo" here--I think it would be ...

Hello! -Nitpicks- She shoved a dandelion into her mother's hand, scattering seeds on her mother's skirt as she did. This repetition kind of bothers me. Idly, she hummed and twirled ...

Hello! You know, that line - the one that divides nations then rebuilds them. This is the only part I didn't like. It feels out of place because you don't ...

In spatial-sequence, or number form synesthesia, numbers, months of the year, and/or days of the week elicit precise locations in space (for example, 1980 may be "farther away" than 1990), ...

Can't we just have a cozy, friendly chat?

Hello! You new to the YWS? I haven't seen you around... I'm Azila--or Zills, or Zilly. :D Onto the critique... -Nitpicks- “Yes, a little lost, sir. I’m from New York, ...

1 and 2. Very cool. I think I like the color one better, because it looks so surreal... but the B&W is also really pretty. 3. I don't like this ...

Yes, I am a vegetarian. Animal Cruelty is nearly always done by at least four other people. So is Abortion, Capital Punishment, Euthanasia, Footballers pay and some other things. Yayness! ...

I'm about to start The Book Thief by Markus Zusak and I can't wait! It's an awesome book--you'll like it. :D I'm almost done with it, and his writing style ...

My past topics included: Vegetarianism Witchcraft Contraception Are you vegetarian? Hmm... "is reading a lost art" sounds very cool. You could also talk about writing with that--two in one. Or ...

These are nice! 9, 11, 12 and 14 seem slanted (see my review on your other thread) but the others are really nice. I like number 8, 10 and 13. ...

Hi, Sohini! I didn't know you lived in India! Anyway... 1. This one's too big, I can't really see it all that well. Sorry. 2. Very cool. The water looks ...

Yay veges, indeed! I'm vegetarian as well. Go with the cereal--fast food will turn you into a giant cockroach.* ~Azila~ *Information not based on studies.