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I noticed that your boutique looked a bit empty... and I happen to have posted something yesterday that hasn't gotten any reviews yet (probably due to my lack of activity ...

Hi, Camille! Sorry I haven't gotten this to you earlier *grumbles excuses* I'll do separate reviews for part one and part two. Part one... Nitpicks Under other circumstances, I would ...

Me too! I really thought it was a new feature. I thought to myself "Nifty! I wonder why Nate hasn't said anything about it in the Information Desk." Then, I ...

Wow. I agree that the second one is quite overwhelming. The bright-greenness of the eye (combined with its size) are startling. I think it could be sharpened a little, as ...

Anorexia is commanly called Ana among anorexics, just as their is death and the person Death if you see what I mean, sorry for any confustion. And I missed out ...

Hello there! Could you please seperate your paragraphs before posting? If you have all your text bunched up like this it gets hard to read. For example, rather than: There ...

Hello! :) Firstly, I want to make it clear that I don't know much about poetry. I'll try to do my best, though, and I hope it's helpful. :D Why ...

Back and forth, back and forth. Windshield wipers flashed across the woodland landscape in a hypnotic dance. Their song of swoosh-ka, swoosh-ka was a regular drumbeat against the erratic ping-ping-ti-

Hey there! 1. I find the background a little distracting, but the foreground is really nice. Great capture of the butterfly's profile! 2. Again, the background is distracting. I also ...

Interesting! I like the blue haze and the bubbles. However, the upside down letters seem a little random. Maybe try making them a reflection? All you'd need to do is ...

Nitpicks His father, Iitska Sorana I, was the King of a place named Kuushiika (Koo/Sh/Kah). When Iitsuka was about sixteen, he was introduced to a girl named Kiinik Morona (Key/Nick_Moh/Roh/Nah), ...

-Nitpicks- The old man at the gas station plucked a shaft of the long grass that grew from spaces between the concrete slabs and slid it into one of the ...

Very cool. I love the composition and idea of it. I do agree that the fish in the upper right corner is really ... weird. I can't really tell how ...

Hello. Nitpicks first... I want to tell you The legend about Georgia - Sakartvelo: When Godfather allotted lands to a mankind, Georgians where not there. I think "when" before "godfather" ...

Hi, Mizz-icy! I'm sorry that this didn't work out with the contest (I swear, we had no idea you had entered!) and I don't know if it's your fault or ...