Azila

Two things: 1) I was looking at the YWS Blog. Under the "Recent Entries" on the right side of the page, the bottom link was "Visit the archives for more!" ...

Hey there! -Nitpicks- Self-consciously I look at my own beige-colored carpet littered with cheerios and crushed cracker crumbs. There should be a comma after "Self-consciously." Which reminds me that

Hey, Suz! The ice crashed around us like the sky was falling. I stood and waited while she tried to get her key into the lock. Nina’s fingers shook. I ...

Hi, JFW! I'm doing this as a prize for Suz's contest, so sorry that I got here so late. I've been busy -- and distracted. I hope the attachment with ...

Hi RandomGrrl! Oh, I'm sad that it's over... but kind satisfied with the end, all the same. [s]Lastly[/s], her eyes settled on a figure towering over her bed. She was ...

Hello! I liked this one MUCH more that part three. I actually think three was completely unnecessary. It was just an info-dump, really. I suggest you take the information from ...

Diamonds bob playfully on little waves. They wink and twirl, bobbing underwater only to pop back up again. They make a kind of trail across the green water, out to ...

Hi. Well, I liked this. But not as much as the others. Anyway, more on that later -- just now, we've got nitpicks to do! As she skipped up the ...

Hi, RG! I have to say -- I'm addicted. Especially after this intriguing addition. I will definitely be reading on. And again, I'm sorry if I repeat something someone else ...

Hey! Sorry this took so long -- I've been really busy. I'll try to get my crits of the other parts to you sooner. :D Oh, and sorry if I ...

Hi. Well, this isn't really my type of reading... I enjoy Hitchcock films ( Vertigo , in particular -- have you seen it?), but for some reason reading a story ...

Thank you all so much for reviewing this! I'm actually feeling a bit depressed about this piece, but I'm going to try to edit it before posting any more. Right ...

That's so sweet. This isn't the last part, is it? *braces herself for the answer that she dreads but thinks is true* She dropped all her books on the couch, ...

I was just coming over here to report the same thing as Alainna: whenever I save a crit as a draft then come back and finish it and post it, ...

Hi Suzanne! I'm back for more of your addictive writing! :D Elijah, the mourning of nothing, sat across from us, and Trisha, the loner with friends, sat next to him. ...