Azila

About the 'I don't remembers' in the first part, I did consider doing some of that, but I wanted to seem like it was actually happening as I was writing ...

Hi there, Canis! You haven't written (or posted, anyway) anything recently, so when I heard about this, I got so excited that I started to bounce in my chair! :) ...

Hi! High above he sails the sky, I don't really understand this line... do you mean to say "IN the sky?" I'm not quite sure... :? An opalescent globe, wrapped ...

Nice! The proportions are very nice, and you seem to have a lot of control. The only suggestion I have is that you make the dark parts darker, so that ...

Nice! Kind of abstract, and very poetic and pretty. I don't know that much about poetry, but I'm learning, so bear with me. :D Soil sticks to the skin, I ...

EDIT: I realized after writing this critique that the thread is from 2006, but I decided too post the review anyway... You can delete it if you want. I'll start ...

Hi! I just had to read this, because ironically, I'm working on a story about a blind person right now. The characters are quite different, naturally, but they have their ...

-Nitpicks- Gwinny squealed with delight as she tugged relentlessly on my hand, her blonde curls bouncing with [s]her[/s] enthusiasm. This is a matter of opinion, but I think this sentence ...

Hello! First off, I have to apologize. You requested a review on this like a month ago and I haven't gotten around to depositing it until now. Sooo sorry. Anyway, ...

Thanks, Gyr! I actually was thinking of doing this partially as an exercise in writing using only non-visual senses. I still might do it, actually -- and I think he/she ...

Thanks for all the advise, people! Like I dais, I'm not even sure I'll end up writing this -- but it's nice to learn what y'all know. gamechanger10 >> I ...

Awesome! The only problem I have with it is the two gold stars rule -- for one thing, not everyone who reads something and likes gives it a gold star ...

Hi, Serena! Sorry I couldn't get this to you sooner -- I've been really busy. Because there’s something so lovely and beautiful about the good dreams, the really good ones ...

Hi! I actually quite liked this. It's short -- yes -- but I like flash-fiction. Anyway, more of that later... first I'm gonna do some nitpicks. The music forces my ...

Wow. I don't know much about poetry -- and thus don't review it much -- but I saw this on the front page and started reading... and loved it immediately. ...