Azila

Hi, again! I see your thread is empty, so... Yes, it IS called "Ours," but it's posted in Other Fiction, and it's not mushy-gushy. If it were, I wouldn't ask ...

It hit me in the face -between the eyes I might add. Nice opening line! I think there should be a comma after "eyes," though. I could feel its stinging ...

*Ehem* Remember, you're supposed to tell me when you post something new? ;) Anyway... _________________ Snowflakes fall to the forest floor, settling gently onto beds of moss. All is silent. ...

Sorry for posting yet AGAIN in the thread, but I was reading this again and I just had to point out the fact that I love the irony of this ...

Thank you guys so much! Canislupis>> Thanks! Your review helped so much. I have fixed most of the little things you pointed out and will work more on the more ...

Wow. This is very, very nice. The shading, the shine of his skin, the wind in his hair, the storm clouds overhead ... all very well-done. The one suggestion I ...

Nope!

Hi there! I'm going to start with the grammar/spelling nitpicks, then go on to the overall stuff. Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. "Hi you've reached my voice mail and I am ...

Hi! Sorry if I repeat anything other reveiwers have said... London, as we once know it, has been abandoned by her once reliable neighbours. Shouldn't that be "knew?" “General, I ...

Thank you two so much! I guess I need to clarify Kenny's species... but I didn't really want to to be obvious. I'll have to think about it. Sam: by ...

No requests yet? I'll start it off: It's called "Ours" and it's in Other Fiction... I hope that's okay with you? Thank you! And please let me know if there's ...

Hmm... I like the idea of this poem. It's simple, elegant, and thought-provoking in an almost nostalgic way. But in some places the rhythm kind of bothered me. Because it's ...

Hi, Sam! I just thought I'd get you back for your critique on my story. ^^ _________________________________ Maybe someday, she’d wake up, buried heaps of new capitalism, her values and ...

My fingers trail down Kenny’s forehead and alight on two warm, delicate balls. Our eyes. The air is cool here – cooler than the others – and the pressing whine ...

Hi! I apologize in advance if I'm mean -- I'm not being sadistic. I actually do want to help you. :D “Tag, you’re it,” said Jamie as he tapped me ...