Azila

Hello! I'm here, as requested... though it seems like you've had a lot of reviews already, so I'm not sure how much help lil ol' me will be, but it ...

Hullo! I probably shouldn't be reviewing this, seeing as we're competitors, but oh well. :] It was completely dark except for the cellphone light that was only slightly muffled by ...

I'm not a vegetarian... Meh, there are enough chickens in the world. Besides, they can't even fly. Hardly a bird. More like an obese rat with feathers. The same goes ...

Hi! Ilovebubbles123 has already pointed out most of the little errors and such, so I think I'll skip that and just talk about the story on a whole. The plot ...

Hello my new-found friend. ;) I wrote this for a contest (the deadline is this Saturday) and it's already undergone one major renovation, but there's still time for another if ...

Greetings! Baby dear, take our love. It was never ours to give, but we know you'll accept it. I love this line... but I have to admit I'm a little ...

Hullo! We could be, and we could do anything we wanted to. This was a tad confusing to me. You mean that they could be anything they wanted and they ...

Hullo! Just a few little things to point out before I get to the real meat of the review. All had been killed and summarily stuffed, and then wedged into ...

The last of the orange left the iron, beat away by the forger's hammer. With his right hand, Merwel swung a hammer repeatedly at the metal; with his left he ...

Hullo. I definitely think this is worth continuing! But more about that later -- first I want to correct some grammatical glitches and typos and stuff. My comments and the ...

Hullo! First off I'm going to point out some little technicalities and such. TheWalkinDude has already done a pretty thorough job of this, but there are some additional things I ...

Hi! I'm back for more, as promised. :) Apex Again, it has the feeling that it should be some folk tale or something -- which I love! At each hierarchical ...

Bog How wonderfully ominous! At first, I thought it was just someone stuck in mud, but as the piece progresses, I see that this bog is much, much more than ...

Hullo! First I'll say a few little nit-picky things, then I'll get to more general points. He’d wanted to fly for as long as he could remember. I would love ...

Hullo there! This is a great idea. The introduction of characters was very well done, Pete as a character felt very real, and the backstory was masterfully hinted-at (the "hands--er ...