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Re: Quit Work. Become a Trapeze Artist.
Hullo there, Gryphon! TheWalkinDude has already fixed most of your mistakes, I think, so I'm just going to point out a few parts that seemed awkward to me. Most of ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
'Tis done, Tiger!
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Rebirth: Prologue
Hi there, Tiger! I'm here to review as requested. Sorry it took a little longer than I'd hoped. Hatred and fear awoke in us for the very first time, we ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays from YWS!
Very nice! The banner changed just as I made my 1001st post, so I thought for a while that it was all for me... sigh. Also, the menorah gift is ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Fighting Bullies (Part 1)
Hullo there! Deep in thought about how we would thwart the plans of the worlds villains, we barely noticed the cars and smog that hung thick in the summer air. ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 2)
Hullo, sir! By the way, I would review this even if you didn't threaten to kill me, though the fact that you do makes me feel a lot less selfless... ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
Oops, I forgot to update this. Spike's review is done. I'm open again!
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Wings And Fins (Chapter 1) Rewritten
Hullo there! There's a stuffed spider monkey named Spike that I've had since I was little. I hope you don't mind, but because of your name I picture you looking ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The Light That Fell
Hello, Miss! The world was dark, and all tho se who inhabited it had never seen then real beauty of the world around them. Okay. Firstly, what is that Spoiler ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 1)
Hi! Firstly, I'm sorry that this is so late. I promised you a review a long time ago and I feel bad that I haven't given it to you until ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
Ok, I'm on winter break now, folks, so if you need something to be ripped up, say so here! (Just so you know: if this thread dies, Skins will attack ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: The Salesman (contest entry)
Ahoy! I'm sorry that this is so dreadfully late... but better late than never, right? Anyway, onto the review. I don't have many nit-picks, so I have a feeling the ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
Alrighty guys. Skins and Persephoneia: your reviews are done! Leebass: Since you told me to forget about it, I haven't done it yet... but I plan to! As soon as ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)
Hullo there, sir! Here's your *ehem* requested *ehem* review... He cursed, making his way to the sofa I was sitting on, stumbling slightly along the way. After dropping himself onto ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Buncha Random Photos
Hi there! Here I am, as requested. ^.^ I don't do much photography reviewage generally, but I'll do my best. :) Picture #1: Very nice! I love his expression. The ...
Dec 11, 2010
