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Re: april's fool
lately, at night, he thinks, and inks, all the of the answers onto the palm of his hand so that when the questions come, he'll know how to answer them ...
Apr 4, 2012 -
Re: april's fool
someday we'll go to the edge of the interim, where the ellipses elapse and commas and caesuras grow from conchshells for the birds to pick at, to punctuate phrases of ...
Apr 3, 2012 -
Re: april's fool
Why should I bother being nervous about this when I never know what I'm doing anyway? ----------------------------- do you remember when the sky was made of wallpaper? when its wood ...
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: If you could travel anywhere, where would you go?
ICELAND
Feb 14, 2012 -
Re: A Matter of Age (A.K.A. Skinsy's Confused)
Hey Skins, When I first saw this post the first thing I thought of was the novel A Tree Grows in Brooklyn . Have you read it? It's been a ...
Feb 14, 2012 -
Re: NaNo Therapy Clinic
Whenever I agonize over naming an element in a story, I just name it something like "WildCard1", "WildCard2", etc. And then I go through and find/replace with the right word(s)! ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Detachment
Hello. I really am not a poet and am much less a poetry reviewer, but since I offered and you asked, here I am. I'll try and make myself useful. ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Flash Fiction Fight!
"Don't sing that," you said when I thought you were already asleep. "The stars scare me. The stars and the moon." "Because they're so bright?" I asked. "If there wasn't ...
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Musings of a Quiet God: Fragments
hello. allow me to present the special review-a-la-lowercase,* just for you. this was an interesting read, my friend. you have some really interesting concepts here, honestly, and they certainly make ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Charlie II's WRFF Thread
I've heard you're good. This is a new direction for me and I'm looking for feedback. When you get a chance. :}
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: just cold
I asked you who your mother was, and you told me, she is cloud. I looked for some sort of a joke on your face, but your dark eyes were ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Professor Morgenstern
You already have a lot of excellent reviews on this, and more Likes than I think I have ever seen on a literary piece (congratulations, for what it's worth). Because ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: The Council of Seven
It's been a while, and I'm sure my critiquing muscles are quite rusty, so please bare with me. I apologize in advance for any shortcomings of this review. /obligatory apology. ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Of Angels
When we were little, our parents told us to be ware of angels. They roamed the silver prairies during the day and the velvet mountains at night. We could hear ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: the inklings
hush, now, here come the inklings! lightening bugs on soft green branches bloom again when springtime brinkings touch our futures, ask our answers-- watch them gently toss and beckon, see ...
Jun 28, 2011
