Azila

Hullo Camille! Would you mind ripping this story to pieces for me? It's for Skins's contest and I want all the brutal opinions I can get. ^.^ Thankee muchly!

I don't generally talk about what I remember, because I know that most of it never happened. Never could have happened. Vague recollections of impossible scenes are strewn across the ...

Hi! I'm back! Sorry it took so long for me to get this to you... but better late than never, aye? The underlined bits are parts that are awkward/incorrect, the ...

Hullo again! I'm not going to do the line-by line stuff right now because 1) Wolf and Tiger have covered most of them. 2) you're not really done messing with ...

Hello! Here I am to review, as requested. ^.^ Okay. The first thing I have to say is that you really need to work on your grammar. I think you ...

Skins: yours is done, sir! Cormac: I'm working on it. Should be done tomorrow or the day after. It's finished!

Hello there, sir! I am here to review according to your request--though I was planning on reviewing it today anyway. In fact, I saw it just after you posted it ...

Hi Camille! I'm sorry that this is a little later than I'd hoped, but hopefully you will find it in you to forgive me. ^.~ It seemed as though nothing ...

Hullo there, Camille! Here I am to review as promised. ^.^ Ayra grinned and looked around, absorbing the sights of dream-blue water, dream-blue sky, and dream-tan skin. I'm a little ...

Yours is done, m'lord!

Hullo, Anzius! Here I am to review, as requested. The first thing I did when I started reading this was scroll down and take a look at how long it ...

Your review is done, Perse! Happy Christmas. ^.^

Hullo! I don't review much poetry, because (even after taking a college-course on the subject) I really don't know that much about it. But since you requested so politely, I'll ...

Alright. To continue this rambly tradition... I just felt sortof inspired after taling to you last night, and... voila! Yay! I'm proud to have inspired you, Monkeybug. ^.^ Yes. I'm ...

Canis! Why didn't you tell me you'd posted something?! Well, I've found it and to show you how useless secrecy is, I shall proceed to rip it to shreds. With ...