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Azila

  • Fiction Discussion Re: Character Description

    I pull my knees into my chest and rest my head against the cool glass of the window. Outside, I can see the crocuses and snowbells starting to pop up ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 9

    Wow. This is getting really intense. Though the subject matter is gory and despicable, you write it in a way that is respectful while also getting your point across. It ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 8

    Groucho! This novel is honestly just getting better and better. I know I've said that five hundred bazillion times before, but it's really quite true. I'm quite tempted to say ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Character Description

    Have you ever met someone who is so clearly out of their mind that being around them makes even a madman sane in comparison? If not, then you haven't met ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Character Description

    The Idea Whether you are a novelist, a short story writer, or a bit of both, it's a pretty fair bet to say that you will have to, at some ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: The Firebird

    Hi Jenthura! Sorry I'm so late getting to this. Hopefully you will find it in your heart to forgive me. ^_~ Firstly, I have to say that I was really ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]

    All done, Yuriishness! I gotta say that was a really... um... interesting review to write. O.o I've never tried to tell someone how to make their story worse before! ^_^

    Feb 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Princess SpongeBob

    Hi Yuri! Okay. That was... um... pretty bad. >.< This is a new experience for me, to review something that's trying to be bad! So first of all I'm going ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 7

    Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed this in so long--I had to take a week pretty much completely off from YWS because of schoolwork. Anyhow, I'm back now! ^_^ Okay. I'm ...

    Feb 25, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: The Angel is Busy Fighting a Heavenly War as of Now *closed*

    Hello, Awesomesauce! Would you mind checking out a short story of mine ? Like I say, it's a short story (not a poem) so if you don't want to review ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 6

    Hi! Wow. This piece really is getting better and better. I know I've said that before, but it's true. Your style is perfectly suited to describing the disgusting, hellish camp, ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 5

    Hi, day! I'm back. I hope you're feeling better. I really think this novel is getting better and better as you portray more and more detail and immediacy. I can ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]

    Done.

    Feb 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Dusk: Prologue

    Hi! Thanks for the request. ^_^ “How do I always get pulled into these situations?” I could help but think “I try to do something good for once and it ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]

    Done. ^_^

    Feb 15, 2011


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