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Re: Character Description
I pull my knees into my chest and rest my head against the cool glass of the window. Outside, I can see the crocuses and snowbells starting to pop up ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 9
Wow. This is getting really intense. Though the subject matter is gory and despicable, you write it in a way that is respectful while also getting your point across. It ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 8
Groucho! This novel is honestly just getting better and better. I know I've said that five hundred bazillion times before, but it's really quite true. I'm quite tempted to say ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Character Description
Have you ever met someone who is so clearly out of their mind that being around them makes even a madman sane in comparison? If not, then you haven't met ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Character Description
The Idea Whether you are a novelist, a short story writer, or a bit of both, it's a pretty fair bet to say that you will have to, at some ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: The Firebird
Hi Jenthura! Sorry I'm so late getting to this. Hopefully you will find it in your heart to forgive me. ^_~ Firstly, I have to say that I was really ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
All done, Yuriishness! I gotta say that was a really... um... interesting review to write. O.o I've never tried to tell someone how to make their story worse before! ^_^
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Princess SpongeBob
Hi Yuri! Okay. That was... um... pretty bad. >.< This is a new experience for me, to review something that's trying to be bad! So first of all I'm going ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 7
Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed this in so long--I had to take a week pretty much completely off from YWS because of schoolwork. Anyhow, I'm back now! ^_^ Okay. I'm ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: The Angel is Busy Fighting a Heavenly War as of Now *closed*
Hello, Awesomesauce! Would you mind checking out a short story of mine ? Like I say, it's a short story (not a poem) so if you don't want to review ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 6
Hi! Wow. This piece really is getting better and better. I know I've said that before, but it's true. Your style is perfectly suited to describing the disgusting, hellish camp, ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 5
Hi, day! I'm back. I hope you're feeling better. I really think this novel is getting better and better as you portray more and more detail and immediacy. I can ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
Done.
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Dusk: Prologue
Hi! Thanks for the request. ^_^ “How do I always get pulled into these situations?” I could help but think “I try to do something good for once and it ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
Done. ^_^
Feb 15, 2011
