Azila

I love it! So is this why she is the way she is when she's older?? I agree with canislupis on everything she said especially that Manizha should be younger ...

Ooh, melikes! Short and sweet. Your descriptions are beautiful even if the plot isn't the most original thing in the world... but hey, there are no new ideas anyway. The ...

In the bright bathroom light, they were strangely large and dominated the golden-brown rings around them. Is the golden-brown her skin or her eyelashes? If it's the latter (which I ...

Hi Misty! This is pretty good... it's not my favorite of your stuff that I've read, but it's pretty good. I don't feel much connection with Annie, though, so you ...

Hi Misty! I loved reading this! It's so creepy, yet so fun to read! I was sucked in from beginning to end and am still bouncing, waiting for more. I ...

Power surged through her, a light of darkness, black and bright. Interesting description. Try to elaborate on it a bit more, perhaps make a whole separate sentence for it? That ...

Interesting idea! The kind of scary thing is that I started a novel a while ago about a floating city. Of course, the situation was quite different, but I thought ...

Thank you so much, everyone! I changed a lot of things, but I just don't have the heart to take out the alligators yet (sorry Snoink and Co.) but I'll ...

Hi! I was a great read! I really felt like I was inside her head, good job. I love the way you include little details (I've read that autistic people ...

Hi guys! Thanks so much for the reviews people! I'm not sure I am going to write more on it, I haven't thought of more yet, anyway :D Like I ...

Wow! I must say, gadi, that my esteem of your writing capability (already exceedingly high) sky-rocketed after reading this. It is SO funny! My gosh, I think I'll have to ...

I really liked it. A lot of the wording is very ...well... wordy :D In a good way; not so much that you didn't get your point across, but enough ...

I had this scene floating around in my head and just had to write it down. I don't usually write stuff like this, but I like the way this came ...

Hi! It's pretty good. It's not your best, as (in my opinion anyway) it doesn't really say much, but it's well written. Parts of it were confusing, like weather the ...

I really like this piece. I like how you wrote it (second person makes anything seem new and different... and personal) and what it is about --the mother going insane. ...