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AymehMonz

  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Beginnings and Endings

    [quote="Katty_Wat"]As we stepped into the bright, cobbled street from the alleyway, it was like old times. quote] Sorry to keep quoting but I do agree with the other should be ...

    Jun 7, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Parallel Worlds

    This is a book that two students have created about things that mean something to them. The book has been written in a fictional manner and contains short stories which ...

    Jun 2, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Can I brake?

    Can I brake? by Kat Somethings just about to break. I can almost hear it crack, a sound of a dreadful mistake. Somethings getting in the way. I can see ...

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Heartbeats and Heartache

    Thank you all of the positive comments. I know I said yesterday that I had considered your suggestions and was going to make changes to my work but I had ...

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A lover's Era

    Hey guys! I took your comments into consideration and ammended my poem! I would like to thank you both for taking the time to review it. It's comments like these ...

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A lover's Era

    Moments, memories, utter bliss, From the first to final kiss. Treasures from an unknown land, Are cherished whilst walking hand in hand, Staring into eachothers eyes, Both victims of love's ...

    Apr 24, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Heartbeats and Heartache

    Thank you for the feedback everyone! I will take it all into consideration and make ammendments shortly! :) x

    Apr 24, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Heartbeats and Heartache

    You lied and lied yet I believed, I always ran back, you always deceived, With cruel intentions, you'd break my heart, You've always been my weakness, from the start. Your ...

    Apr 21, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Game Over

    This is my first post submitted on the site and I would be greatful for any comments. I am using this work as part of my work in my college ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Game Over

    Game Over He turned into the driveway and walked down the concrete path. He took in a breath of fresh air and then swung his rucksack off of his shoulder; ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Winter Dust

    I think that this poem is good because although it has no syllable pattern, it's could represent the fact that there is no set speed to the snow falling. I ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Significant Figures

    I like to think That I step lightly In my polarized bubble, Oblivious to conniving convivial sadness And the blue gloom otherwise. Still, I hear the peals of nervous laughter ...

    Oct 4, 2007


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