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Re: Pudding
Hi charcoalspacewolfman! I’m coming into this poem completely blind, but the title immediately made me curious. “Pudding” sounds harmless and comforting, so opening with a shovel and a pit in ...
Aug 2 -
Re: Chapter one: Can we really start over?
Very interesting story I must say! However, I'll keep it very short. You have a lot of telling and significantly less showing. For example: After an array of strang treatment ...
May 29, 2022 -
Re: Tree's Revenge
Hello ^o^ Now, it's been about two years since I've written a review on YWS and I wanna disclaim that I totally suck at it. To start off, since this ...
Aug 4, 2014 -
Re: Health Is Wealth
Hello! To start off I have to say that I really like what you portrayed. Now, you can say I'm older than you and have thus more 'reading experience' so, ...
Dec 25, 2013
