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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pudding

    Hi charcoalspacewolfman! I’m coming into this poem completely blind, but the title immediately made me curious. “Pudding” sounds harmless and comforting, so opening with a shovel and a pit in ...

    Aug 2
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Chapter one: Can we really start over?

    Very interesting story I must say! However, I'll keep it very short. You have a lot of telling and significantly less showing. For example: After an array of strang treatment ...

    May 29, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Tree's Revenge

    Hello ^o^ Now, it's been about two years since I've written a review on YWS and I wanna disclaim that I totally suck at it. To start off, since this ...

    Aug 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Health Is Wealth

    Hello! To start off I have to say that I really like what you portrayed. Now, you can say I'm older than you and have thus more 'reading experience' so, ...

    Dec 25, 2013


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