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Re: Reactions, emotions, thoughts, etc?
I hate the smell of cigarettes and the waves of smoke they make, but I don't yell at him when he lights one. Hair in his eyes, stubble on his ...
Nov 11, 2013 -
Re: why would someone be obsessed with the 1920's?
Like, what reasons could motivate that?
Mar 12, 2013 -
Re: Would you keep reading?
And there is the first line. With a shaking hand, he pretends it’s permanent--a tattoo among paper dolls. Must be majestic, must be fit for a queen. Careful now, for ...
Jan 29, 2013 -
Re: they're all too character-driven
All my stories. And sometimes it works well. But most of the time, I'll mentally change something, and then be like, "...wait, now what?" Any tips?
Jan 28, 2013 -
Re: "he deigns to wear an invisible crown...
We deign to call him "princess." ...erm. Would you read on? What does it make you assume the story's about?
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [8]
I haven't been on here for so long! But hi everyone. You're all fantastic looking.
Aug 27, 2012 -
Re: So what do you think of pixie cuts?
Ala Halle Berry: I'll just throw it out there that I'm a 20 year old African American woman. ^_^. I'm getting my hair done on Thursday, and I'm 98% sure ...
Aug 26, 2012 -
Re: Things Left Unsaid
A/N: Written...about two years ago. One of my older short stories that I still have a soft spot for, and possibly one of the lightest things I've written. The pessimistic, ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Easy Come, Easy Go
Thank you to everyone who's commented on this, since I haven't been on here for a while. Your comments make me want to keep writing, so really, thank you so ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Fallen Awake
A cheesy little love story written a year or so ago. Didn't edit, so don't mind the misuse of semi-colons and such. ** Dim lights masked over the room, setting ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Push
Thank you for the comment! I had some downtime, so I tried to fix up the stanzas a little bit! Hopefully it's an easier read now.
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Push
A/N: A free-verse written out of boredom and a refusal to write my essay. Heed the warning! Push, pull Thrust , shove Never stopping, never moving. That’s the two of ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: A Place Called Elysian Fields
Wow. Thank you SO much, guys. Somehow I missed these.
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: He Must Have Called Me Moe
A/N: Man, I'm so bored, and it's been so long since I wrote, that this tumbled out. Needs work, so comments are loved! *** We are warriors. We sell flesh ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Beauty's Beholder
Haha, actually, that last line wasn't part of the story, just a side comment/author's note. I should probably fix that... :p But thank you! I haven't read that work before, ...
Nov 23, 2011