AyameAya

Haha! This made me giggle a lot xD Thanks for the review :'D I see your points and I will go over this chapter and the other two to change ...

Your welcome! x3

I won't mark this as a review because I still need to do some research on what makes a good one, so I won't totally embarress myself Dx I loved ...

Woah 0n0 *Changes it right away* It also only appears like a RPG in this chapter... xD It's not, this kind of thing won't ever happen again in the story ...

Thanks! Lol for the first thing I noticed that too and I was like 'owO' because in the writing there is a space between them xD Don't worry, just this ...

Thanks!

Thank you so much for the review! I never noticed all the specific attention I put towards eyes and I have been told about my 'said' problem before. xD I ...

Thank you so much for the helpful review! You made some very good points and I will fix them so that they are better. ^^ I wrote this before I ...

Thanks so much! I will definatly put this review to good use for future chapters ^w^