AwesomeSocks

This does sound pretty sad :( However, I feel as if even though you say the character's plot is flat, you still want people to cheer you on. I really ...

Ooh, I like this! I don't know about anyone else, but I find this deeply resonates with me :) My only pet peeve is spelling and grammar: I'm pretty sure ...

This is beautiful! Many of the words you used were perfect enough to paint a picture in my mind. "drink in the wonderful times"

I'm sorry if this looks all weird, I had problems copying and pasting :(

Woah. Seriously. This is amazing. !!! This is so powerful, I totally get what you're saying!!!!!! I'll try writing a better review later... but just so you know I really ...

Yes, this story suddenly changed! I hated the other one I did, so I submitted another...please review this one differently!