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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Fire's Escape

    I love this! It is so descriptive, and puts a new light on fire. No pun intended... The word choice was fantastic: "Tendrils," "Writhing," "Pyra..." I don't usually like poetry ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: 14

    I'm in awe. This is simply... beautiful! I love the way you format this, with incomplete sentences in each stanza. It has a very nice rhythm to it. The words ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Child's Dream

    This poem is marvelous! It gives me a dark feeling, with a sort of desperate ache in my heart. It made me think of desperation, a girl seeking love, but ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Charms of Opher (Part 2)

    "I groaned, and said, “Whatever happens, I’m blaming it on you. You started it.”" This part made me laugh XD Tristyn and Lyka are so adorable together! I really like ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Charms of Opher (Part 1)

    This story is great! I love the foreshadowing with the charms and the quiz. There was a bit of rambling at the beginning, but it carried on quite nicely. At ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Empty Space

    This is really great! I enjoy your writing style. I like the way you format this, with a piece for each person. It leaves a bit a mystery, and I ...

    Aug 27, 2011


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