Awakening

My love is of a birth as vile As e'er a man could find himself to be. Leading saints to taint Eve's virgin smile, With compassion nowhere eyes can see. ...

Least Among my vile things, And the pain my demons bring, The softest sour note I sing, Is my conviction in myself. My Pride in my own moral health, Assurance ...

could you review this one for me, im entering it in a competition and would love your feeback, go as deep as you want!

Torrents filled with demon vices, Passion: posion that entices. Among humanity's vocations I must admit that mine is Satan's. . Why do addicts craft serene Words as such is ever ...

I did enhoy this poem quite a bit. I appreciated that the abba ryhme pattern was at least a little more creative than the aabb or abab pattern that finds ...

I liked it, it was am extremely good example of narrative poetry. Narrative poetry is, at its best, an emotionally enveloping and ironic. Both of which you executed very well. ...

I pretty much agree with above commentor, in the end, people will not enjoy reading a poem that sounds like an acuustaion or attempted indoctrination by a radical. I think ...

To lay between two hungry hounds, And bare no violent traits. To give no power to the fates, In their capricious state. Only then the Siren Sounds Of dependence and ...

ok...idk if my comp is freking out, but the verse breaks after "stunted from the cold" , " for love still unreceived", "

Among the symbols of my youth: The wood, the steel, the stone, I lay to hear the reasonance Of my empty second home. When at rest and meditation, This place ...

The skull of any animal Would be her chosen face Hailed as thrice as beautiful As hers, now in place. Teeth like rotting floorboards And eyes as sunken ditches MAss ...

I liked it, and I think if you divided it up correctly, it could be an excelleny lyric POEM. But i always see a song or song lyrics as having ...

I enjoyed it overall. I was wondering, just by the title, if it would be the rantings of one radical group or another, but I was happy to find that ...

I liked it. It wasn't overly pretenious, it had a kind of wisdom in its simplicity. Carried still a lot of though in its brevity, and I thought it was ...

I thought the premise was very good, and even in the rough stages, this poem had excellent imagery. I don't like long drawn out reviews when other people give them ...