Awaken-the-Dark

I'd just like to quickly thank everyone that reviewed! They all helped me a lot with seeing some stuff in my writing, so thanks! Byes for now! Jazz, xoxox

Hostility. The word seemed fitting to the cab driver, being able to feel the emotion emitting from the two occupants in his backseat. They were both staring coldly out their ...

I liked this...like many people have said above, it does seem very cynical, but i think that's what makes it so interesting. It seemed to get a little repetitive, although ...

Wow....i really liked that, it seemed very deep and meaningful. The only thing is some of the sentences are a little hard to understand, just some phrasing that you need ...

Wow, that little bit was so filled with new things that we don't know about that it makes you want to know what else happens. Maybe post more of the ...

Hey, I'm Jasmine and I'm 14 years old. :D I was introduced to this site by my friend, she showed it to me as we both enjoy to writing and ...