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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue

    I love this! The descripitons are really good, and I love how you described Doctor and Colonel Watson and their characters. "to the ones that hold the subway system but ...

    Oct 20, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Dramatic Re: The first page of my novel - would love to hear what you think

    I love this! The descriptions were great, and I could really see where you were. "madness that pissed down his face like sweat" was a little cofusing to me. Did ...

    Oct 19, 2020


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)