Auxiira

This is really good! I'm in school right now, but I'll review it tomorrow! (I have a concert tonight...)

Thanks!!

Thanks! I'm not really a poem person, so when I do write them, they aren't necessarily very good. This one had been hanging around for a few days and got ...

(I have a few bbcode problems in there...)

This is formatted wrong and I can't edit it properly. So look at the comment above and it's comment to see your review properly...

Overall: -I think that you have a very good base idea here, but it really needs to be edited and embellished. -You can roll all of these chapters into one. ...

Hey Peggy! Auxiira here to review as I promised. I am going to take the whole text, put it in a quote and put the corrections in red first whilst ...

I think that it's the formatting of the post, I'll go an put in double spaces...

Calm it. It is a little long, but jordin, I've read longer with no paragraphing at all...

Thanks Ani, you just made me feel better *hugs*

I love this Toesy!

It seems that you hit one of Ita's many nerves. The points he made were valid, but he didn't have to be that ... aaaanyhow. That's all I had to ...

@Knight Guinea of Pig, Taurus is mainly May. @TinyDancer: I see myself in this poem. Geh, I'm a typical Taurus!

I like this!!

Danke Alfie! I love Terry Prachett