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Okay! Kirito1102! Auxiira here to review! Okay, I think that this could be a very good story if you just sorted out the narrative a bit. I'm sorry to say ...

Hi Wherethewindgoes! Auxii here to review your work! I can't find much to say about this! You write really well and don't make many mistakes. There's just one or two ...

Waa shivers all over as I read this! Hey dizzy, Auxiira here to review your poem! I really can't find much to say apart from maybe the restructuring of a ...

Hey Aria, Auxii here to review your lovely piece of work! I know that english isn't your native language so I'll just point out the main bits... hopefully^^ 1. Okay ...

Okay hi rwgbookwriter, I'm Auxiira and I'm going to try and review your story! 1: Paragraphing! please, please, please paragraph! It make your story really hard to read! 2: I'm ...

Hey Kakali! Auxiira here! I'm going to review your Chapter so here we go! I really like this. You start off with a feral side with Jayden and his bobcat, ...

I really, really like this, but it seems more like the beginning to a novel than a short story. That's just my feelings. he asked as he paced in front ...