Auxiira

Hi BadFox! Auxii here to review your chapter! Firstly, I can see why this hasn't been reviewed yet, it's incredibly long. I'd suggest splitting it up into parts to make ...

Hey Satira! Auxii here to review your work today! If you could just bear with me, I'm a little rusty. So first things first: You seem to make a lot ...

Hey Brunnera! I'm Auxii and I'll be reviewing your work today! So. Having read this, I can see what you mean. It's a little list like 'She did... and then..." ...

Hello there, Jasper! I'm Auxii and I'll be reviewing your work today! So, I read this, then I read the first part, then I came back and read this. And ...

Hey Zar! Seeing as we're exchanging chapters, I'll review too! Ohh, yay, sci-fi! I'll always have myself a bit of sci-fi .< Okay, so I kinda get the vibe that ...

Heyo Tenten! Back again to review the next chapter! So, let's see. A few nitpicks. -The first paragraph didn't sit quite right with me. It does indeed portray her distress, ...

Heyo again, Tenny! Into the breach of your next chapter, my friend! (I have in no way had more caffeine than normal, trust me!) Ohh, so this is a big ...

Heyo Tenny! Auxii here to review for you today! Ohhh! Angels! and Valkyries, maybe? Intriguing. Always love a good mystical story, I do. A few nitpicks: -...well I can't FIND ...

Yo, hey there, Rice! How's you, girl? Anyhow, I'm here to review this for you. I love how you start this. Immedia-stress is one of my favorite ways to start! ...

So, I've fetched myself a cup of tea, taken the Tapioca out of the oven, put on some potato wedges, and a couple of washed, and have come back for ...

Hello again Blue! I've been to check up on my tapioca in the oven, and I'm back to review Chapter 4! Page 4: Ohh, the park is magical .< I ...

Hey Blue! Auxii here to review! I waaas going to review just the chapters in the Green Room, but that would be lik skipping the first chapters of a book, ...

Gah! *rubs goosebumps from her arms* Hey Steward! Auxii here to review your haunting piece of writing! Frankly, you almost had me in tears. I've had to go through this ...

Hey ConverseFireGirl! Firstly, your avvie is distracting! Just saying. I feel the idea behind this poem is quite good, I'm assuming (tell me if I'm wrong), that you're trying to ...

Hey Jordan! Auxii here to review! First let me rub the goosebumps off of my arms. *shivers* This was brilliant, really brilliant. Just a few nitpicks: "the one memory that ...