Autumn

I thought it was pretty good, and I liked the use of repetition I'm not too great with crit but: Why had I come?

thanks for the comments! =D ^.^ I agree with you both about the last sentence, i'll edit it out also lyrical_sunshine I read over the bird & cup bit again ...

cheers for the comments and crit you three ^^ I'll go edit it in a sec. As for the last part.. still not sure I guess I'll leave it there ...

Hi guys! well this is my first time posting a story on this account, had to make a new one since I can't get into my old account (phoenix) :[ ...

awwess that's so cute ^.^ nice job, though if you want some crit, I'd suggest adding a greater variation of tone on the dragon to give it more depth (like ...

thanks guys =]

tehe, I love the expression on the first one.. and the third one is awesome too, great effect

'As I did, I caught the barest hint of a reflection in his eyes, and I wondered.' This part needs to have some more explanation; I don't really understand what ...

Punctuation and sentence structure are something you could work on, like for example 'Anxiety of tomorrow' should be 'Anxieties of tomorrow' or 'Tomorrow's anxieties'. Overall though I liked it; you ...

Wow you drew that? Very nice! Please could you read the rules though, we do ask that you do at least two reviews before submitting. No worries though! This is ...

Hey everyone, thanks for replying, it's nice to meet you all! and Mesh, either'll be fine =]

I thought I'd have a go at digitally inking and colouring one of my anime drawings, so here it is >.< the hands and feet look wierd but oh well

Okay well since I'm useless at creating a witty / interesting introduction I'll just let ya know some stuff about me... My name's Caroline and I'm 16 I'm from England ...