Autumn

I thought it was pretty good up to like the 8th line, then I got kinda confuzed.

awws :[ well it's a pretty nice composition, though I think it would look better (like more balanced) if the lower half of the water was cut off

My name is Antredoolina Applewheat, and I am the mystic ruler of the land of Quickie Mart. My best friend is a cow named Robertus, and I am a neopet.

eh, I don't really like plot webbing. Usually I just doodle pictures of the characters and different scenes and jot notes around them with ideas for plots etc.

thanks alot for the feedback everyone! =] I'm edging towards idea #1, so I'll get working on the plot for that. I have a general idea of where it will ...

I want to create a fantasy novel, but can never think of a decent one which I stick with, and avoiding cliche is so hard for me. >.

M.A. Crawford sounds good =D If I ever get published, I would probably use my first name, seconded with my mum's maiden name

cheers for the feedback, I too was kinda worried about the cliche element. one possible idea I was thinking was that - the demons are weak in the human realm, ...

Ok this is just a basic idea I thought up about half hour ago and is very undeveloped, but what do you think on first impressions? Eva is an angel ...

I saw him live, it was awesome ^^

Thanks a bunch for the comments and crit, I really appreciate it! I'll get it edited in a sec.

really? thankyou very much! ^^ I'll go make the edits, pretty sure fuelled is spelt with 2 L's though?

This is another idea I've been tossing around about whether to develop or not.. I was pretty tired when I wrote it so I don't think it's that good x_x ...

Overall, I really enjoyed this, great work! My only problem was that I got pretty confuzed in some parts, especially in the opening few paragraphs so maybe they could be ...

Thanks for the replies and crit everyone! =] I'll go edit the grammar, and when I do the rewrite I'll take into account all your advice x