Young Writers Society

Thanks guys :) And The.Dreamwalker, yeah, I can't really be bothered using proper punctuation/grammar with any poems I come up with xP But thank you :)

"I simply miss you. A breeze cannot carry me into your arms. My knives to the side & your bombs returned, I'm ready if you are." I LOVE that stanza! ...

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Ndaww thank you guys! :D And rothwise, "My lips?" was like, a sort of... questioning thing. Like, doubting if his lips were going to be mine, so to speak ;) ...

empty answers empty hearts I cannot see It is too dark You say something I heard you speak I try to listen I try to reach if you expect so ...

Aww, thank you! ^ Haha :)

Haha PaperNessa, it's because the guy I'm talking about lives near me. :) Not with me... hahaha. Thanks for the comment anyways ^~^ Same to you Geronimo.

Helllooo. Firstly, I enjoyed reading this, but there's just a few things that I noticed, which I will point out for you. Ellie approached Travis with caution in the summer ...

I miss you. I miss knowing you were only a walk away. I miss being able to wake up and see your face. Your lovely face. Blue-green eyes the size ...

First grade class Crayons on paper Instructions to draw A family picture... Already, this poem has my attention. Weelll done. :D The teacher stops Sits next to him Quietly asks ...

Saying sorry doesn't mean anything to me. I like this opening line. :) Sorry doesn't make the world a better place, to live or to stay. Hmm, for this, I ...

Another old write. I have no name I am but a ghost For no one see's me Even as I lie here Among the crowds I see the faces Drifting ...

Okay so basically it's just a short piece between two characters, 250-350 words. It's gotta be about an incident... and this is pretty much what I wrote. I need to ...

I liked this (: I'm Christian but I don't find this offending at all. It's completely true, well most of it. I loved the entire poem. How did you come ...

Two words were all I had. Brilliant opening line (; But I knew it was not enough. Three times you told me so, and I shall never forget. Many thing ...