Aust

First of all, thank you for the comments. I really liked this, you clearly portray a sense of loss, we can all relate to this. It must have been hard ...

Well, I haven't been here for a very long time, for a few reasons (quite important to me, though...), so I'm sorry If anyone who remembers me took the offence... ...

Well, the poem is talking about emotions that have been secluded and hidden within the soul for a very long time. About dreams that were risen through lots of pain ...

Love is always painful , no matter what we do, when, why or how. Even if everything seems quite fine, there is always kind of a trick that bothers you, ...

I can say I have suggestions or possible corrections. Of course there are some mistakes that have been mentioned before, but that is minor in my opinion. The Main point ...

It is the poem I've posted here in this forum in my first topic. There, it was only a beginning of the poem, and now I've finished it. I do ...

Great! "But you will never listen, They won't break your spirit down, Because you are an angel! When time comes, you will fly…" I wish it was as true as ...

Thanks. I'm very happy you liked it. Can it really happen that there are no mistakes? Aust.

Well, that is quite intriguing. The wishing is great, truly, and the way you phrased it is quite impressive. If it's dedicated to someone, wait for enormous applause =). No ...

Nice one! However, I must say that it has a bit problems with rhyme at the end of each part. Was it written that way in purpose? Because the lack ...

Work??? No, I don't think so. It's just so... so... so... I don't even have words. Beautiful, strong, emotional, what can I say? The last time I felt this way ...

Hard times are only making us stronger. Don't put your hands up! Just believe in yourself, and you'll be able to conquer whatever you want! And to cry is fine... ...

Well, as said many times, you have to work on this poem. The idea is quite intriguing, and to be honest, I would like to read the poem after it ...

"People are the most strange thing that exists on this planet." (Was written in one of my favorite books, though I'm not sure this is the correct phrase). Most of ...

Well, another poem by me. It was kind of a dream that was written on the paper. Hope it's ok. Silent Wings Leaving the ground with winter, Flying above on ...