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Re: Treason prologue
Thanks so much for the tips!!! I made some changes, and will continue to do so. There are some things I need to add.
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Re: Hotdog
That was really cute and funny. I liked all the dialogue between Tim and the cashiers. It was really simple but funny. Your punctuation seemed fine to me. I didn't ...
Aug 1, 2008
