Aurora

BUBBLE, I think your story so far is great. I really enjoy the heightened vocabularly. The overall tone of your writing is that of a mystery novel and so is ...

Alright I think your story is pretty interesting so far. I think it is cool you got the idea from that Dynasty warriors game. I have actually played the demo ...

I’ve been watching for you all of my life, But no one so far seems to be right. I’ve seen others unite and it’s caused me much strife, To know ...

Yeah this grabbed my attention. I am really curious to know what it is going to be about. I felt like it was well-written and flowed nicely. The way you ...

I loved this!!! I really liked what you were saying, because it is so true. People waste so much time (me included) infront of the TV and stuff, wishing amazing ...

Thanks so much for the tips!!! I made some changes, and will continue to do so. There are some things I need to add.

As the young man felt the coarse rope around his neck, he sighed in disbelief. So this is what it all came down to. For all he knew, all of ...

I loved that story! It was extremely well-written and you are very talented. I think it was a great short story. I felt it was very smart of you to ...

Wow I really liked that a lot!!!!! It was very unique! The whole cliche thing was really clever. It was funny too. I loved the relationship between Tess and Alec. ...

Emma’s heart pounded crazily in her chest as Peter leaned toward her. Her stomach fluttered like a swarm of butterflies. This was it. He was going to kiss her. She ...

I thought that was beautiful. It was extremely well-written and all very moving. The language you used was so vivid. I enjoyed it a lot. It was also all very ...

I really liked this story! It caught my attention definitely and was all full of emotion and excitement. I could really feel the protaganist's passion. Orion was a good villain ...

Kelsey tapped her foot impatiently on the kitchen floor. “Where is he?” She wondered aloud. It was ten past six. Sergio had sworn he would be at her house on ...

I thought this was pretty good. I like how it is just the typical life of a teenager besides the catsuit girl and stuff. All the dialogue was pretty realistic ...

That was really cute and funny. I liked all the dialogue between Tim and the cashiers. It was really simple but funny. Your punctuation seemed fine to me. I didn't ...