Auhbrei

Thank You *bows*

Ok! Thanks!:D

First I liked it but if you are going to rhyme do it don't scatter it here there and mayned over there It wasn't intended to rhyme, that just the ...

please...If you read it, tell me what you think!

For your age it was ...err...pretty good. Yes it does need work, but it has poteintal. Don't listen to the person who said it was bad. Keep writing! Auhbrei