Audy

You've a consistent olden sort of style/voice to all these Alfred :o It's impressive! "Seven Days, Seven Lies" is my favorite. :3

#1, Hannah took the line I was gonna poke. That is just juicy. The rest of the poem has good imagery and the rhymes flow very sing-song ^_^ #2 I ...

^ Thanks everyone C: Reason 4 thumb pressures turn red to white and back again kaleidoscope of touch if this is skin, i cannot help but wonder at the aurora ...

Reason 3 i wanna be a modern day femme warrior nomad because i find funny the way your expression says i could've axed off my knees instead but didja know ...

^ Aiiiye, so lovely. I really feel the wave-effect in the repeated lines. The images are

^ Oh! Way to maintain pacing, rhythm and flow there, Lemony. Smooth as silk

Oooooh, I love #2 - my first read through is that of a sleepy/lazy getting out of bed, and my 2nd read through is that of a hungry monster/absorbing/needing, those ...

^ TY so much C: Yeah, I wasn't sure how much I carried across. I might later revise: those brown molasses pools where I'm dipped in the negative and end ...

X reasons why I never write you: Reason 2 dare I welcome you back to Georgia the red back pines the rolling hills the lazy summer days horseback mottled flies ...

X reasons why I never write you: Reason 1 we are the great fling of a frizbee throw like how you used to call me Cookies and I would launch ...

a chat and a riddle the crow will croak at the spoon.

Dear Golden Pen, When you write your first chapter and mid-way through, you think: Oh, I've a better idea for an opening! And you get through writing that 2nd idea ...

I'm totes on this.

T-30 until Venusshop!

:oo Oooh I like it! So it will require 11 poets to participate?