Audy

I love me some love poems. Pyro- fff this: the moon split into fragments of white The night/white opening rhyme --> slickly placed. Misanthropist - So this one has this ...

I'ma have to try Rydias form exercises :O Also *subscribed* can't wait to see them! I absolutely love the voice developed in "Silence" and the ending had me going like

Apologies - Its okay, I dunno what half I write is either! Can I just say that I love the word "cuppa" :D It sounds so homey and folky. Strokes ...

Nuh uh. Crocs > gators :P Wanders - oh there are lots of interesting turns of phrases, this poem is absolutely vivid of imagery, I love it! Sky-Scenery - this ...

Laure - linguistic pasta intrigues me so much, I want to write a poem revolving around what that could mean o.o Do you take/are interested in linguistics, because I totes ...

Jealousy - made me laugh xD I luff haikus

Garments - I liked this one, I actually found there to be a lot of humor in it, like a sassiness meets formal "they bewilder, they startle in manners" the ...

I think the "rustiness" aspect of this just comes from how certain words stick out rather than being woven so for example: emaciated/ vibrating/ epoch -- I dunno about those ...

Nightmares - ooh so I love the twist in the end with what the colors ended up meaning (the sky!) and how you kept the colors moving throughout the poem, ...

Road - smooth rhymes! Life - maybe instead of "small" you can say "though" so you have a smoother transition(?) but yay for haikus! Well done ^^ I want to ...

1. love the flow: thunder/threat/rain and the creepy imagery :3 2. I like the negative syntax repeated, toomuchsun, never quite ended/ never quite unflooded ~ the last one is a ...

8 a boy by the well wears sandals made of elephant ears and seashells, so that he feels big when he walks with his bucket so that he can hear ...

1. Adjective 2. Noun 3. Verb 4. Adjective 5. Person under me choose Noun sticky

7 Sushi Rolls you've fed me in sushi rolls and I don't know, I suppose there's something about packed rice and raw fish, and the cold of it rolled up ...

6 Click to see the form. Your bagpipes appear to be dummied up in these cattle lands, and we scarcely hear your noise anymore. All is too quiet here, and ...