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Re: a tarot spread for nonbelievers
O_O that glove compartment! I MUST KNOW WHAT IS INSIDE! There is something kind of enchanting about the concept of a highway cathedral. That concept is so delicious :3 I ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: bedside manner
:) I am so excited to see this journey play out this month, it's a perspective foreign to me but I feel like I am inside your pocket and experiencing ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: but colored shapes still move by.
OOOO, so much love! Lines like "trip on your existence" "bloom of blood" and the very earnestness and strength of voice in that promise, like I believe this narrator. I ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: I'd hate to think I'm missing out
There are two things here that are working so fabulously and that is this sense of vulnerability and realness and truth in the voice of this narrator, any metaphor shoved ...
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Re: war-torn, lovestruck
You will find a fan out of me :3 AHHH!!
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: merlot footnotes
Heck yes we're going to save the world today! I would save the world with you any day :)
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: fork
So right from the beginning I already feel kind of intimate with the narrator and that is a pleasant feeling that we don't really experience much in poetry :) It ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: kintsugi ~ a call to arms
Who knew mathematics and poetry were a match made in heaven? I loved this, the voice is unique and the point of view refreshing. Plus, like...that differentiation metaphor ..!! ?
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: traveler with a broken heart
I really love the drawn out "l" sounds throughout the piece and I found it works really well for this kind of hidden aggressiveness. The second stanza is a winner ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: paper and ink monsters
I really love the concept of midnight trains and that feeling that is present in this to run, to travel, to see. Love the details and specificity of "hoarfrost tongue", ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: walk away; recover;
Ahhhhhhhh, yes! So, I get so excited about poems :3 This one for sure. This is just cute and endearing and also kind of ...aches! That subtext at the end ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: cocoa hands
Ahhhh yyeees
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: I'm going to shave a dog and name it Bruce
Oh man. That phallus line is too perfect :3 I actually appreciated that ending too, it felt very securely earned. I get so much glee out of reading this, you ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: the girl with the origami heart
Ahhh, gorgeous lines in here. I felt my heart surge in the "but I will never stop creating wildfires for others", it's so satisfyingly triumphant. Beautiful!
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: the entire history of human desire takes 70 minutes to tell
I really really love the "kiss me clumsy" line, I kind of want it printed on a shirt. The poem as a contrast to Dylan Thomas' really brought out the ...
Apr 1, 2017