Audy

Ooh, I am digging the exploration of the word and the thoughts that stream out of it. Especially this bit here: I have a thousand tasks...never intended to complete.

Ooo, if only! If only time were so! Also this. Quatrains can be difficult but you nailed this one. This can be made into a meme-quote thing, it is subtly ...

So this poem sets my inspiration button blazing, ahhhhhhh, I always love your pieces. There is something so precise and meditative in your word choices that really draws on this ...

Hey Spirited, the metaphor of the trophy fits so well with your message and I love the title-choice for this piece! It is short and to the point, and I ...

Grieves the sun thumbing the plumbs of my belly an egg carton in its naked contours, molded pulp ridges, deliberately barren. And needs little done to scatter that fever of ...

From My Mother's Drawers Puberty

Little Bird Sings of Automation I am not too happy with this one. Too telling, too much agenda. I want to up the stylism a bit, and see if I ...

There's a cool thing you're doing here in flipping the lines of the magical, love fateful day in September but also the much more grounded, ordinary, could have happened to ...

I love the concept it presents in its title and the refrain in "back to dust again" also feels apt.

Uhm. Why does @Rydia get a WHOLE poem? :/ FFFF. Love the catchiness of the pink jukebox, there's a lyrical song-like quality in this together with the dialogue exchange of ...

I would hate to be on the receiving end of this poem :3 The anger and pain is so prevalent, it takes a poet to have a reader relish in ...

I am in love with the image "jewel tones" I love the rebelliousness in this and the tattoo experience both as a symbol and transformative experience but also there is ...

I love the conclusion to "in the garden", it feels so fitting for this kind of world and the the "sunshine broke through wispy clouds with crowbar hands. " that ...

^ Love that so much. I already have a sense of the interactions and dynamics within this couple and their family and the conflict makes it rich and fun :3 ...

I do not declare. DO NOT GHOST ME. I KNOW YOUR TRICKS.