Audy

Yay something good to read! I really liked this! The flow of the poem was really good and it was very deep. Shadows leaping up, dancing past my addled mind. ...

One hates to love One loves to hate The two of them relate. One fights for love One loves to fight Neither are in the right. One kills to love ...

I like this, it's cute! And I get it, or at least I think I do. The music kept her heart beating no? It's a really interesting idea, I do ...

I like it, it's a strong message to write about and the rhyming scheme works, I don't think it sounds forced at all. I really like the first and second ...

Thanks so much everyone! I've fixed the commas and a few minor things and I appreciate everyone's critiques and feedback. I'm glad I could write a poem we all relate ...

I agree with what's been said. Yeah the list of the seven sins, annoyed me because it didn't flow at all. I do like it though =) The beginning I ...

Genius as in Artemis Fowl genius? From the title, I was thinking of Aladdin. Lol! I was told that the plural of genius is genii (as in gen-eye...I assume) I ...

I wrote this a long time ago, I've probably edited it about a thousand times, but let me know if I've missed anything, I'm prone to silly mistakes :? I ...

I really love this! :D I think you did an excellent job, your word choice was great and it flowed very well! ^_^

I liked it, it's good! I'm no poetry expert, but I think the start of every line should be capitalized? I dunno for sure. what do you need , a ...

This is cute! I really liked it, and /somehow/ the thing I liked most about it was that it was short, sweet, and didn't have much descriptions yet it's still ...

I loved it ^_^ It's really interesting and makes me want to read more. What is this /oath/ ? Hmm... well xD you did a good job, it's certainly well ...

A friend of mine sent me the link =) I think I got about 300, it's really addicting :D

object: water color: magenta emotion: embarrassed :oops: physical sensation: aching (as in pain) sound: hammering smell: smoke

One of my main characters in the story that I'm writing happens to be a genius (or at the least very very very intelligent). Because of this though, it's kind ...