Audy

I loved this poem! It's not about something that we read much about (unless it's mothers day or something), yet we certainly need to. My mom and I are really ...

I like this, nice flow. You've captivated the emotions and doubts well. I'm sorry that you feel depressed...sometimes writing is the best way to express those feelings and 'organize' that ...

lol! That was hilarious. I also enjoyed the Charlie bit --the gun thing was quite funny but the name bit to me is not funny at all and it gets ...

I liked this! The score years thing was a nice effect and added to the 'folktale-ness' of the story. I especially loved how just as he figured out the meaning ...

Hehe I used to write poetry by forming rhymes first. I would think...'toaster' and 'coaster' then jump around and say "THAT RHYMES!" and then try to make a poem about ...

As night falls , creatures of the night stir , drawn to the underworld ' s seduction trapped by night s spell, no one escapes. Do you mean as /day/ ...

It's a bit vague, I think. Had there not been a title or anything, I wouldn't have known it was talking about suicide, which I guess is perfectly fine since ...

Plus, I loved reciting this to a little jingle XD lol! :lol: The 'I don't know about you all' sounds a bit Christmasy doesn't it? Wasn't done intentionally. I couldn't ...

I do like this, it was very descriptive and it does sound promising. I cannot see anything wrong with it that hasn't been mentioned before, but if you want to ...

Oh, that does sound interesting! xD I get the whole third-person narrative, I think that's pretty neat. If you write it the right way, I think it could be used ...

Yeah don't stop--keep writing, edit later, usually works for me too ;D Also I find skipping along in your story helps sometimes too. There are times where I just don't ...

I think it would be fun, I'm in :) Of course I'd love to know more about the specifics, but most likely I'm in. I hope it's not fantasy though ...

10/10 I love that username =) D'you know that those type of hats that your username suggests really did make people go mad?

I like to have my chapters relatively around the same length...I don't want one chapter to be a page long and then have another chapter thirty pages or something like ...

Just to post my own two cents, from all that I've gone through in the writing process... The single most important thing you can do is just to write. Especially ...