Audy

Best HP Quote /ever/ ^_^

Lol, this poem is cute ^^ I'm such a sucker for things like this. I think the descriptions depicted here are perfect, not overly into detail, but I can imagine ...

I like this a lot, you've captivated a lot of the qualities of being humans --mostly we all make mistakes. It's nice and I liked the theme :) I really ...

Fencing is awesome! I used to take archery but I had long quit that --sharp arrows + terrible hand-eye coordination = new hobby. xDD Pity that lefties bother you...I can ...

Greenriver- Likewise :) Thank you, and you're right now that I look back to it, it does seem like the wrong narrative to take, I'll look over this sometime and ...

mhm...lotsa spelling and capitalization errors in this. It really distracts from the work, so make sure you look over your work and fix all these before you post. Oh, why ...

Oh, I really love this poem! :D I imagine someone sitting in an old cabin by a fireplace and a large window showing the frostiness outside, I love how you ...

Hey Summer! Well the first thing I thought was that it /does/ sound like jumbled thoughts ;P The rhythm...I don't know, it's not too terrible but it could use a ...

Lol, I saw this and I'm like, 'okay a poem about a beach' Then I read it and I'm thinking...'no a deep poem about society' -- but when I read ...

You taunt me and you mock me, this secret of yours withhold yet I spied and pried discreetly, and sorry was my tortured soul-- that I could ever betray your ...

I like this =) I agree with what's already been said, you should add some emotions to this piece and give it more depth. I think the rhyme is fine, ...

Why do there harsh words make me feel crammed? there should be 'their' and again here: Why can't they open there eyes and see? You made the same mistake :P ...

Hehe, cute av! (sorry I love kittens!) So anyways... I just saw a few little errors to should be 'too' aloud should be 'allowed', though I'm pretty sure these have ...

I agree with what's already been said, the theme of the poem is interesting and you have some good descriptions, but see -- all you're doing is describing the moon. ...

2149 Words Liam It all began with a flash of green light; his body was propelled into the heavens, charged with a surge of adrenaline. The kick-off was momentous. Before ...