Audy

Hullo! I'm Audy, just thought I'd critique your piece today =D I thought this was a pretty good start! There was certainly a lyrical quality about it that I liked, ...

Hey, Elentari! Welcome to YWS, I'm Audy and I'll be doing a line by line for today ^_^ I agree with everything that has been said above. Most of the ...

Welcome to YWS! ^_^ I'm Audy, if you have any questions, need anything, just let me know. I agree with what's been said above. Some of your sentences read somewhat ...

I applaud the use of optimism in this piece, and I definitely love the message it's trying to convey :) I definitely agree with everything that was said above. It's ...

xD I love yours Icaruss! Once upon a time...the end. (couldn't resist xD) Finally finished my novel! Didn't save. "Why no, drunk I'm not Officer." "Oh. See, what had happened ...

Do the trees everywhere have any symbolic meaning, you think? :) That would be neat! Anyway, it sounds like a good idea! However, I think it would be better to ...

What's the most random thing you can think of? Banana peel.

NIIICE :o I literally said that out loud after I finished reading it. I absolutely loved it! Gold star for you. I'm not much of a poet to find anything ...

All right! ^_^ I get to be the minority here and say that I completely DISAGREE with this poem. But it does a decent job of conveying an atheist's point ...

Hm, I kinda like this. I like the voice and the tone that is evident throughout the piece. It definitely goes well with the message you are trying to convey-- ...

The cold hurts, before their bodies turn numb, it devours them -- chews them up and spits them out until they're nothing but shattering bones piled up against the wind. ...

Bravo! I really liked this, especially the first and last stanza. The subtlety in the beginning with the single-word 'Vanished.' really emphasized the horrific screams in the next line. The ...

If I ever need a quick idea for a project I've procrastinated, or an essay I need to write, inspirational quotes usually do the trick -- music works well too, ...

"And it's not frightening at all, so stop looking like a rabbit." The Naming , Alison Croggon

I have 1, 2, and 5 on my iPod too! ^_^ 9/10! Because Moulin Rouge is near and dear to my heart :) Mr. Brightside ~ The Killers Nine in ...