Audy

Hey Forestqueen, I'll be your reviewer for today! The format and sound of this piece sounds more like a song than a narrative poem - it might could even go ...

I was actually not even thinking about gay rights when I read it- simply discrimination and humanity's faults in general. I think- by mentioning or alluding somewhere the specific topic ...

Thank you for your kind reviews :) And you both are right. By top to bottom, I actually meant column by column :X my bad! But thanks for correcting me. ...

i was once just ____________________________________ but now im not an awkward little girl _______________________________ but fun to look at-- with beaver teeth and frizzy curls _____________________

(these are in no particular order...) 1. The Kite Runner & A Thousand Splendid Suns by Khaled Hosseini 2. My Sister's Keeper by Jodi Picoult 3. Cat's Cradle by Kurt ...

Hey Jetpack, whenever you have the time, I'd really appreciate it :) It's just the first 800 words of my novel, I'm pretty sure it could stand by itself in ...

So I just read the first chapter of Advent Child and I have to say I think it's fantastic ^_^ I'm very picky with fantasy, but yours is very original. ...

Hey Xunnamius! I'm Audy. Whenever you have the time, I'd love any feedback on The Collection of Asterisks which is an excerpt of my novel. It's short, just about 800 ...

The murky woodland began to ooze abhorrence, all in admiration for Eric’s equanimity. I have no idea what this is supposed to say. The woodland hates how Eric is calm? ...

Asterisk - a small starlike symbol (*), used in writing and printing [...] to indicate omission. Note: Before anyone asks this is not about vampires. This does take place in ...

Awe, lovely poem! Or really, it's quite a tragic poem but you've executed it quite stunningly. I love what you've done to this line: Secret, knowledge, lie because you've pretty ...

I liked this poem, it had a nice rhythm to it though it was a bit off in some places. The 'No need to drink' line seemed forced, it really ...

The majority of fanfics are just wish fulfillment. When you're a writer with your own characters, you tend to have a little more dignity :P

Above examples are spot-on! Just to add on to what was said above about word-choice and diction, probably one of the best ways to portray a character's emotions is through ...

Meh, it doesn't sound like Uglies -- except for the whole future-perfection thing and dysfunctional society, but that's just a common theme in any futuristic novel -- Brave New World, ...