Audy

Hello BlueAfrica, I agree with Walker on this one, this piece reads more like a rant than a poem. I just have a few things to add to what was ...

Hello alliyah, Overall, I agree with formslipper. I wouldn't say this was lofty, but perhaps a bit ambitious. You have a lot of great ideas, but that is essentially what ...

Hello Chocolate, I would like some feedback on a short poem of mine. Any advice on how to improve would be welcomed, so go as tough as you'd like. ^^ ...

Hello babymagic, This piece made me feel absolutely nothing. It's a good start, but it needs some work. Keep writing, keep experimenting, I feel like you have a lot of ...

Hello PurpleEurope, Hehe, I actually like your title for this piece which was what drew me to it ^^; I think it's cute and it suits the poem itself. So ...

Happy birthday, I am quite right twenty having been cursed for this latter decade to share a date with terrorism, but no matter how long I sit and stare and ...

ethanswish, Out of curiosity I did a quick google search of your title. Hmm. ;) Have you rated this correctly? In either case, this has become an instant favorite. I ...

567ajt, Not bad. The images here are fantastic, in a dark sort of way. Specifically loved the first stanza, A silent rendition Of the art of murder loved that line, ...

Cailey, This is a cute poem. A nice exercise in rhyming, was it? Actually, I picked it to review because it reminds me of some of my earliest poems. I ...

Hello Shinrai, I see this is filed under "Dramatic Poetry", but it is not dramatic, darling. All those rhymes, how could it be anything but lyrical? :D When you think ...

Hello formslipper, I had to read this several times, but in a good way. It's not everyday I get to enjoy a poem that challenges me and provokes thoughtful meditations. ...

...makes me stronger. ;) Hello, Lynnette! I'm Audy and I must say, this was a pleasure to read. Great beginning, really did get my attention, and what held me? Your ...

Hello, It's nice to meet you. As requested, I'll try to review as honestly as possible. I agree with a lot of what's been said. Mainly, the first sentence is ...

Hello hockeyfan, I'm Audy. I agree very much with Apple and with much to add. I read through this and I am left wanting more. Not that I'm particularly excited ...

Thanks for the reviews, everyone! :) I also appreciate all the corrections. Duely noted and fixed now. I am planning to continue this, but I have to keep myself a ...