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Boolovesyou, What a great piece! I enjoyed it. I felt the message was clearly executed throughout. You did a decent job narrating as well as using the images of the ...

Hello absolution, First off, I'd like to say the piece is amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed it, I thought it was quite thought provoking and the way you executed it was ...

Prologue. 1016 words Fiel The acrid scent of smoked flesh stung my nasal passageways, invading my lungs. I coughed violently, flinging myself up with every heaving breath. I felt the ...

Kitty! I would really appreciate feedback on my poem. :D Thank you!

Hello Persy, Lovely use of imagery. Afterwards, I had to google-search the title and the results left me this warm feeling of contentment. Kinda like a resonating (aha!) moment. I ...

Hello Artsy, First off, welcome to YWS! I must say, this is pretty good for your first piece up here! I enjoyed the "rawness" of it - it felt genuine. ...

Hello Alex! Sorry that it took a while for me to take a look at this. My overall impressions; The fact that this is a love story warms my heart ...

Yup, reading does it for me. Not just books, but articles and current events too. What you see, what you hear that goes on in the world... I mean,how can ...

Hello sarebear, This is an interesting piece. I particularly love the structure and the concept for it, it just needs a little polishing and some revision. I actually wonder why ...

Hello! I know poetry isn't your favorite, but I would really appreciate it. :) Thanks!

Hello Twinkle4ever, I understand you want us to give you marks out of 30, but would it really be helpful? Knowing a percentage of how you score does not improve ...

I know, as you will come to know, or might have already known, the most profound word in all of language. Its power manifests itself as twine, tethering realities in ...

Hello blueraspberry, I actually enjoyed this piece :D It's very straightforward, but I liked the simplicity of it too. It fits the subject, the title, it doesn't try to be ...

Hello Demonness, I believe this would go under 'lyrics' yes? Or if you meant it as a poem then at least under lyric poetry. Or even 'other poetry', anything but ...

Hello Dreamwalker, Lovely piece, absolutely breath-taking. The rhythm and flow are flawless - and the images here are just beautiful, particularly enjoyed the first four lines. I see imminent reality ...