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Oh this is very cool! 4xm0fvj96504xqz The whole right side of my circle is ridiculous xD I'm Logical, Linguistic - and my People, Intrapersonal are tied. Visual is soo low ...

Circlewriter, I'm going to agree with Miyakko here. There's no emotions in this for me to believe it. In a sense though, I kind of like how we're left with ...

Jas, You've gotten great reviews for this and I agree with all of them. Especially about Chloe's deattachment. I followed them home, after the reception, after the ceremony at the ...

Jas, At first I was confused about the chapter numbers, but now I get it :) What a neat idea to switch perspectives with every "half chapter" ^-^ At least, ...

Jas! I know you said chapter two, but I'm going to start from the beginning. I didn't read all the reviews -though I noticed this has been thoroughly edited, so ...

Hello, I'd appreciate any feedback on this , as it would be helpful. Rip it to shreds! Thanks :)

Hm. Usually when I come up with characters, I get an essence of their personality and characteristics in my head. When I first started writing - it was a list ...

Hey Evenslily, I just did a quick edit on the grammar and commented on some of the dialogue. I must say, you have some interesting characters here. I noticed that ...

gummiebaerrs, It's me again. He had decided to wash his hair out and make a change of clothes a few hours ago, using the patient restroom. No comma needed here, ...

Gummiebaerrs, I hope you don't mind I review this chapter as a standalone :) So let's begin, shall we? Immediately I get the impression that you're a competent writer, so ...

Hey Soulkana, I'm going to review this as a stand-alone, I hope you don't mind. So let's start: Softly comma I tuck a few of his brown locks away from ...

Angelknight, Hello! I hope you don't mind, I haven't read any of the previous chapters, but I'm excited about this one. Let's start! This conversation could not get any more ...

Freakette, I hope you excuse me for not reviewing the previous chapters. In some ways this lets me objectively review this chapter as it stands on its own. So let's ...

Hey AriannaK, I realize you're pretty new to YWS so I first would like to welcome you! :D I think for an early piece of yours, this is actually pretty ...

Lilchoma, Now this indeed is a lyrical piece! Well-done :D This reads and flows so well, it made me want to read it a few times. The rhyming is subtle ...