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Chezka, Hello! Just want to say welcome to YWS. I hope you are liking your first week. As you probably have already seen, this community is filled with lots of ...

Lunasol, I enjoyed reading this as a contemplative piece of poetry. The structure really aided that, the way the lines break mid-thought, reminds me of thought bubbles, or stream-of-consciousness. I ...

^ what they all said. Start where it matters. A lot depends on the type of story you are trying to create. An action story's opening line is most likely ...

Dreamwalker, Almost didn't recognize you with your change of av. But I do love your poems. I love how I can read this two, three, four times and pick up ...

Thersites, I'm back for more, and decidedly so. This was inspiring. The details that you've used to craft these images came together well, so when I got to the end ...

Confused.pirate, Absolutely love this! The style and sounds are excellent, and it was executed well. The imagery, as Sassykat mentioned was clear and well thought out. I particularly was engrossed ...

thersites, I like this a lot. Definitely a unique take. There's a musicality in this and the images here are captivating. I would agree with misstoria; proper punctuation can really ...

Brokenskyre, I like the expressions of the piece. I get a sense of the raw emotions that are present here. However, because of the line breaks, it reads a little ...

Sorry it took so long, everyone. November = last minute preparations for finals, driving around doing errands, and meeting up with family members. But all done, and on holiday. So ...

Crescent, Immediately, I thought the narrative and imagery was moving, if a bit sad. Without the spoiler I would've never thought it was about a duckling though - I mean, ...

Rascalover, At first I had no idea this was the opening scene of a novel since it reads so much like a short story. There are pros and cons to ...

Bigger version We're doing still-life in art class. This one is not exactly finished, so any suggestions to make it look more "complete" (or any suggestions in general) would be ...

Lyria, Love this piece. So many people when approaching political subjects such as this one, they tend to rant-rant-rant about their own beliefs, so what I like about this piece ...

Wow, I can't believe it's been a month or so since the storybook started ^_^ I don't know what the average "life" for storybooks are, but I'm sure a month ...

Wesley Snipes Every person born into this world has a certain amount of time. Whether seventy-five years - or a mere fifteen - our time in this world is precious, ...